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The echo of your affection still lingers,
the mist of times gone by,
A chapter in my life pressed the pages
of my life.

The seeds are planted and our fate written out,
only to be washed away like footprints
in the sand,
But I am I phased?

Not Really. No.

So cliche is my newly written fate,
as i look back of past convosation,
and vent my feelings through the written word.
Am i all that open minded?

I am to walk this world alone,
To run from my fears,
To drift to pastures new,
And grow.

Until It comes apparent that I am,
my own person,
To leave my past, defient.
No regrets.
No fear.


So this is my message to you.
Fate might make a turn for the worse,
but grab life and wear it on your sleeve,
because how likey is your existance?
Just.
Grow.
:iconxrosierevengex:

Author's Comments

yeah... more poetry... if you can call it that...

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:iconcaffeineated-madness:
It's poetry for sure :P don't be so negative. Only thing I could say about it (and maybe this is just me being awkward) is the repetition of the word life near the beginning - "A chapter in my life pressed the pages
of my life." - that, to me, sounds a little off. But maybe that's what you intended anyway, I'm not sure. But other than that, it's not bad ^^

--
"Bloody hell the jacket makes it worse!"
"Beth, your Skaliton is showing"
:iconxrosierevengex:
thanks darling!
and ohh yeahh i never noticed that bit!
thankss! and yeahh it sounds very off
:]
xoox.

--
'Chase the morning. Yield for nothing...'
Repo!thegeneticopera.<3
CabbagePatchKidz Fo'Shizzle!
:P
xoox.
:iconcaffeineated-madness:
Lol happy to help, if it can be called helping :)

--
"Bloody hell the jacket makes it worse!"
"Beth, your Skaliton is showing"
:iconxrosierevengex:
yeahh i consider it as helping
:P
xoox.

--
'Chase the morning. Yield for nothing...'
Repo!thegeneticopera.<3
CabbagePatchKidz Fo'Shizzle!
:P
xoox.
:iconcaffeineated-madness:
Pleased to hear it, just return the favour for me with this new randomness I've been writing and sending to you.
xox

--
"Bloody hell the jacket makes it worse!"
"Beth, your Skaliton is showing"
:iconxrosierevengex:
shall doooo!
:D
xoox.

--
'Chase the morning. Yield for nothing...'
Repo!thegeneticopera.<3
CabbagePatchKidz Fo'Shizzle!
:P
xoox.

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